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stephen dont hurt her! you hurt her and ill hunt you down! leave him Karen and get with Chris, hes the one you need he'll look after you! sorry bit carried away there more please x

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This is good!!! More soon pleaseeeee!!! Haha you wrote it better then I explained it haha ;) x

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More please

I hope Stephen doesn't her Karen again or Chris either for that matter



-- Edited by cazza on Tuesday 14th of August 2012 03:19:43 PM

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Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in this fic. No offence or harm is intended. And yes before anyone says anything there is a fic on the Jayne and Chris fanfic site that is a bit like this I did come up with the idea and then remembed about the one on the other site so I hope you don't think I'm copying.


Rating: 16+ this is going to be a very raunchy fic and most likely contain some sexual sense later on so if you don't approve of this kind of thing don't read. There are some references of SEXUAL ABUSE SO IF YOU'RE GOING TO BE OFFENDED BY THIS DON'T READ.


WARNING THIS NEXT CONTENTS DOES CONTAIN SEXUAL ABUSE REFERENCES THAT SOME READERS MAY FIND OFFENSIVE SO IF YOU ARE ONE OF THOSE I SUGGEST YOU DON'T READ!!!




“I asked who your new friend is” Stephen began shouting he could see she was terrified but didn’t care because he was evil like that.

“Chris” she replied in a croaky voice sounding like she would burst into tears any at any second.

“And what is Chris doing in here?”

“We were talking am I not allowed to do that?” she snapped back.

“I think it was a little more than talking don’t you now what do you have to say?” he walked closer to Karen as he spoke to her sternly.

“I’m just doing my job like you tell me too, teasing all the blokes getting them to want a bit of me and then shoving it back in their faces are you never pleased with anything I do?”

“Talk about shoving it back in their faces more like you were shoving your tits in his face gagging for more. I never told you bring any of them back here and start shagging them. That’s why you didn’t want it last night isn’t it, you’re having an affair with him don’t think I didn’t see him in here last night hiding in your wardrobe.”

“There is nothing going on I’ve not had an affair with anyone… Chris I suggest you get out my dressing room and leave and never come back here again because all you’re doing is ruining my marriage and making my husband angry…” Karen had built up anger, scared of what was in for her that night. She never meant it really when she told Chris to leave and never come back she didn’t want him to go but it was too late he had left out the door tears rolling down his face.

Chris had feelings for Karen he had the first time he saw her dancing He thought she really had feelings for him to the way she kissed him just a few moments ago before Stephen had walked in. She was going to run after him but it was too late and Stephen grabbed her arm stopping her from going anywhere. She was now shaking with fear and petrified what was going to happen to her now Chris had gone.

Stephen raised his hand at her and slapped the back of her hand hard. She was brave and held her tears back however screeched in pain when his hand met hers and she felt the sting of the slap on her skin.

“How many times do I have to tell you, how many ****ing times do I have to tell you that you are not allowed to speak to other men?... one day you might get it into your thick brain I mean what is it you don’t understand when I say no making any contact with other men unless you’re working” he held her wrists tightly bruising them turning them a greeny purple colour.

“I’m sorry” she whispered with a hint of sadness and upset in her voice.

“You’d better be but don’t think I’m done with you yet. Now you go straight home get out of those tatty old clothes and into something slutty and I will deal with you when I get in after I’ve locked this place up. HOME. NOW!” he yelled at her.

She grabbed her bag quickly and ran down out the fire exit at the back of the building and not looking forward to going home but she had no here else to go unless she slept out on the streets. She had thought of that option before but then when she thought of worse things that could happen to her on the streets late at night with all those strange men walking around down alleyways and roads she would be better off inside a house getting abused and treated like ****.


I hope this isn't getting boring.


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Awwww no :'( please do more soon. Don't let Karen get hurt :/ x

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another fantastic update xx

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Thanks for the comments peoples! I will try do an update tomorrow evening as I'm going out tomorrow during the day x

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ah bless her :(

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Poor Karen

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Rating: 16+ this is going to be a very raunchy fic and most likely contain some sexual sense later on so if you don't approve of this kind of thing don't read. There are some references of SEXUAL ABUSE SO IF YOU'RE GOING TO BE OFFENDED BY THIS DON'T READ.


WARNING THIS NEXT CONTENTS DOES CONTAIN SEXUAL ABUSE REFERENCES THAT SOME READERS MAY FIND OFFENSIVE SO IF YOU ARE ONE OF THOSE I SUGGEST YOU DON'T READ!!!


Karen arrived home 15 minutes before Stephen did. She took her shoes off and hung her bag and coat up in the shoe cupboard before heading up the stairs to their bedroom. She was scared and she wasn’t going to lie about it what was he going to do to her was all that was on her mind the whole time. She slowly took her jog bottoms and t-shirt off folding them up neatly and putting them over the back of the chair that was in the corner of the room stroking the soft material as she did this. Next she took her underwear off throwing it into the wash bin with other dirty laundry then on the tip of her toes got her silk dressing gown down from the back of the bedroom door and wrapped it around her naked body.

The dressing gown was made of rich silk, it was a creamy colour and came half way up her thigh. She lay in the bed pulling the covers over her cold body and lay waiting in fear for her husband to arrive home.

When he arrived home 15 minutes just after she had arrived, Karen had already started to drift off into a sleep until she was awoke by Stephen opening the bedroom door to enter and the landing light came shining in disturbing her. She made a few mumbling noises as she awoke just wanting to go back to sleep but knew this wouldn’t be happening for a while yet now that he was home.

He smiled so innocently at her as if her thought the world of her and wouldn’t let anything happen or harm her however this was so not true he was pure evil underneath the innocent look. Slipping his trousers and shirt dumping them in a pile of the floor beside the bed then pulling back the covers to see her tiny frame lying there – she was perfect.

“Come on babe you can’t fall asleep yet”

“Please. Just for one night do we have too I really don’t feel well and so tired” she asked.

“Don’t you dare fall asleep Karen” he started shouting all of a sudden.

“Please I’m so tired I just want to sleep” she rolled over on her side trying to go back to sleep but Stephen pounced on top of her rolling her back onto her back.

“You can after I think you’ve learnt your lesson” he was straddled across her stomach hurting her with his weight.

“Please…” she began to cry and tears, tears filled with fear and pain flowed down her cheeks so softly and neatly falling onto the sheets beneath her.

“Don’t start crying it’s your own fault maybe next time you won’t go sneaking around with other men behind my back” he untied the ribbon of her dressing gown and pealed it away from her naked body. “hmmm… you are so sexy” his mouth made its way to her breast and began sucking and biting on them hard causing the tiny northern to screech in pain once again.

“You are so sick in the head do you know that and I wasn’t sneaking around with other men”

“What did you just say?” he was angry with her even more now how dare she call him sick in the head he thought.

“I said you’re ****ing sick in the head I have no right to be treated like this… this… this isn’t love Stephen this is torture, abuse… Making love with your partner is meant to be something special and happy I don’t feel that when we make love you hurt me and I feel like I’m being treated like a piece of ****” she sobbed loudly.

For the next hour he made painful love to her. He was hurting her once again having her in every way he could no care how much pain she was in as he was having a ball. She had no energy to try fighting him off instead sobbed quietly, lying there allowing him to abuse and bully her to death.

By the time he’d got bored and gone to have a shower she lie shaking and breathless in the middle of the bed naked. She couldn’t move for being in so much pain her body aching all over and her eyes bright red and stinging so much from her helpless crying.

Eventually she stood up when he came out of the bathroom from his shower. Unlike the previous night she was too tired and in so much pain she only had a very quick shower scrubbing every inch of skin however she still felt dirty.
She dried herself with the soft towel and dressed in her jog bottoms, t-shirt and cardigan again.

“Where you going?” Stephen asked as she entered the bedroom again this time fully clothed and putting her UGG boots on that were in the corner of the room.

“Out” she said as she walked out the door.

“Where?”

“I don’t know just out for a drive”

“I’ll come with you” he said getting up out the bed.

“No you bloody well won’t. I need some time on my own to think”

“Think?.... think about what?”

“Just stuff… us… me… you”

“What about us?”

“Just stuff stop asking me questions” she yelled back snapping she had got so angry and frustrated she just wanted to get out and be on her own away from everyone away from Stephen away from the hurt and the pain he caused her.


Sorry there will be Karen and Chris in the next bit if you want me to carry on x

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yes please make it Karen and Chris get rid of Stephen...

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Yes you need to carry on!! When are you doing more?? X

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not sure maybe tomorrow or over the weekend x

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