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The Discovery.

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I don't own Jayne Chris or Karen. This is purely fan-fiction. *** As Jayne walked into her dressing room the smell of vanilla scented candles and fresh flowers filled the room. Jayne and long term boyfriend Chris had been dating for 8 years. As Jayne walked over to the kitchen there was a small pink note on the table "meet me at the Sharjah at 7. Love Chris X" read the note a small smile appeared on Jaynes face. Late that evening Jayne was in her bedroom rummaging through her wardrobe looking for something to wear. "tonight's the night." Jayne said out loud. Over the past few weeks Chris had been hinting about weddings, kids and engagement rings. "Karen?!" Karen was Jaynes flat mate and best friend since they were 15. Jayne didn't receive an answer "she must be out" she thought to herself. The time was now half 6 and Jayne need to get to the restaurant. Jayne picked out an over the shoulder floor length dress from Pia Michi and a silver pair of LouBoutins. Arriving at the restaurant Jayne was early, Jayne was someone who was normally late for everything, not today. Jayne heard Chris' voice around the corner to see Chris kissing another women. A women that Jayne knew well, very well. Jayne marched up to the couple and grabbed the women by the back of her hair "how dare you! Karen explain RIGHT NOW!" Jayne shouted people in the street starting to look in there direction. "Jayne sweetheart, I can explain" "No Chris, I DON'T CARE!" nobody dared talked. Jayne was furious "how long?" Jayne said in a small voice  "what did you say Jayne?" "HOW LONG!" "About 3 months" Chris said with a guilty look on his face. "Karen I.... You..... And him....... 3 months ..... YOU SLAPPER, I TRUSTED YOU" "I'm sorry Jayne" Karen said tears in her eyes.  "Jay I was going to tell you tonight." "I HATE YOU BOTH AND HOPE I WILL NEVER SEE YOU BOTH AND HOPE I WILL BEVER SEE YOU BOTH EVER AGAIN!" and with that Jayne turned and walked into the night never to  see either Karen or Chris ever again.  The End.

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It's really good! When you say "the end" do you mean you won't update it again? It's fab xxx

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OMG this is so good you should carry it on x

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this is brilliant you need to carry on! Or do a sequel?xxxx

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that was fab

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Thank you. It's was for my English practice soo there will be no more sorry xx

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Ohh:( when are you doing another one? I love your fics!

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Haha thanks. Will write one soon :) xx

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good i love your fics as well

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Thank you :) xx

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