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Hi, everyone cazza has offered to help write this fic and this next bit she has wrote so say all your thanks to her for updating! x


Just as they were ready to leave Karen’s dressing room her mobile rang & when she saw it was from Emma the expression on her face changed & Chris said Karen what’s wrong she looked at him & said it’s Emma I think Steve must have found out about Us then Chris said well you’ll never find out if you don’t answer your phone will you & She said what if…. Chris said stop worrying & answer it I’ll wait outside or I’ll see you at the rink & Karen grabbed his arm NO STAY HERE PLEASE I need you with tears in her eyes Chris then put his arm around her & said go on you better answer your phone before Emma hangs up.


Karen answered hi baby you ok Emma sounded upset hi Mum she said have you seen the paper or been online today yet & Karen turned & looked at Chris & mouthed Steve must know about Us & Karen said yeah baby why Emma said Dad thinks you let Us come here so that you could be with …. Karen said Emma baby that’s not the reason you’re there your dad wanted you there but if he thinks that well he’s wrong, then Karen heard Steve shouting in the background tell your Mother you’ll both be on the next flight home & to get lover boy out of there before you get there or this will be…. & Karen looked at Chris again & mouthed he’s going ballistic & he said give me the phone & he said hiya Emma hunni & Emma said oh hi C… & Steve said give me that Em I want to talk to him & Emma said Dad said he …. & Chris said sorry Emma but I don’t want to talk to the idiot, your Mum’s upset so I’ll go try calm her down & get her cheered up before We go back to the rink ok & Emma said ok is mum there & Chris passed Karen the phone & Emma asked her if she was ok & Karen said yeah baby you Laura enjoy the rest of your time there & I’ll see you when you get home ok love you both loads & Emma a said they both loved her too then said bye & Chris said come here darling & gave Karen a re assuring cuddle & kissed her head then said jokingly right young lady back to work & Karen giggled & gave him a quick kiss on the lips & said thanks for staying with me while I took the call



-- Edited by TeamKarenBarber on Monday 18th of June 2012 09:38:09 PM

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This next bit is wrote again by cazza


On the way back to the rink Chris flirtatiously patted Karen’s bum & she turned & said to him that’s not allowed in Work Mr Dean & you know that playfully poking her tongue out & giving him a flirtatious wink as if to say later when they had almost reached the door to the rink Chris grabbed her waist pulling her in to him & she giggled & said to him you’re a naughty boy Christopher Dean & he gazed in to her eyes & said you love it & you know it sexy, & their lips locked into a lingering passionate kiss & their hands all over each other & when the noticed the time Chris said Jayne won’t be happy with Us being away this long let’s get back & when they got back to the rink trying to act like nothing had happened, Jayne said jokingly & where have you two been Karen said sorry Jayne I had a call from Emma, still talking to Jane pointed to Chris I have no idea where he’s been & skated away to help Jen & Daniel with their routine , Jayne skated over to where Chris was & said I see you got her calmed down then darling & Chris said don’t let Karen hear you calling me that she’d kill you & they both started to laugh & Chris shouted Chico over to show him & Jodeyne the routine for the next week

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This is the second part of the update wrote by cazza

It was the week of the routine that Chico had hi top off, Chris was teaching Chico the routine & Karen looking up from her blackberry heard him say “no Chico like this” so she stopped what she was doing & watched as Chris was showing Chico the routine & he was wiggling his bum & Karen couldn’t stop laughing when Jane saw her She skated over & said are you enjoying this routine & Karen nodded but couldn’t reply for laughing then Jayne started laughing too & Chris heard & shouted over what’s up you two are you both Jealous & Jayne shouted WELL I KNOW SOMEONE THAT CAN’T WAIT TO GET Y…. & Karen looked at her & nudged her as if to say oi shut up you.


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When I can think of ideas I will do more I promise

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thanks for the updates Cazza they were great

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Next bit wrote by cazza again x


When everyone had the day before the live show Karen asked Jayne if she’d like to join herself & Chris for dinner but before she got a chance to reply Chris skated over towards them shaking his head to Jayne Karen didn’t see this as she was standing with her back to Chris, when he reached them he put his arms around Karen’s waist & Jayne said thanks for asking Kaz but Phil & I are taking the kids to the Cinema tonight they’ve been going on so much about the new Ice Age movie that’s out so We promised We’d take them tonight & Chris smiled to Jayne & mouthed thanks then he said to Karen is my company not good enough for you then Kaz & she looked at him & jokingly said erm let me think & gave him a flirtatious smile & wink & he said just you wait Barber & Jayne laughed & said see you lovebirds tomorrow & gave both Karen & Chris a hug then left then wrapped her arms around Chris’s neck & said where are We going tonight babe & he said it’s a secret darling lets go home & get changed he then jokingly said after all it takes you hours to decide what to wear when We’re going anywhere & Karen said erm I decide pretty quick what to wear when We’re going out then Chris said that’s only because you cant resist being away from me too long & you know it darling in which Karen replied I’m going to grab my stuff from the dressing room I’ll meet you outside to which Chris replied oh damn I was hoping We could h… & Karen looked at him & said I said later didn’t I you can wait just a few hours longer I’m sure & Chris said a few hours are you joking? to which Karen said nope I’m not & Chris jokingly put on a sad face & Karen laughed & said you should see your face babe to which Chris said I knew you were joking & run after her & said get in that dressing room now & grab your stuff We’re going to be late AGAIN Karen then said where are We going then tell me & Chris said told you it’s a secret darling Karen then said do I dress smart, casual or what & Chris said smart but that’s all I’m saying & they both went in to their dressing rooms grabbed their stuff & went home as soon as they got in the door Karen went straight over to the answer phone to check if she had any messages there was one from Emma Karen said oh Me.. & Chris said check it later go get a shower & changed We need to be at the restaurant for & Karen looking at her watch said it’s on…. Chris said you know what your like get in that shower now Karen was in & out the shower in 10 minutes a lot quicker than usual she then dried her hair & scrunched it up to make it softy & slightly curly then she finally went to the wardrobe searching for something to wear & decided rather quickly on a red strappy dress with a lace border at the top & of course a pair of red killer heels & a small white wrap around her shoulders & went back downstairs carrying her shoes & called READY BABE & Chris run out to grab his Jacket & turned to Karen & said you look beautiful darling to which Karen replied well you don’t look too bad yourself you s… to which Chris said you behave young lady In reply Karen said erm I always do babe you know that & gave him a flirtatious smile.

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Wrote again by cazza

As the restaurant was in walking distance of Karen’s flat but Chris ordered a taxi & helped Karen inside, then he asked the driver to take a longer route to keep Karen guessing & the driver obliged, Karen was quizzing Chris asking where the were going & he said you’ll see soon enough darling & he put his arm round her & she leaned in for a kiss & were still kissing when the taxi stopped & Chris pulled away then said We’re here darling come on are you hungry? & Karen said starving babe come on when they went it the atmosphere was so romantic with soft lighting & soft music they were showed to their table which was a little romantic booth Chris had asked for specifically when he made the booking , then they ordered wine & their meal Chris went in to his pocket & Karen said what are you doing babe & he said you’ll see in a minute close your eyes & she did & he held her hand & popped a little open box on it & told her to open her eyes & when She did she was so happy & hugged him tight & moved her lips to his & they kissed passionately & he said well what’s the answer darling & She looked at it & said I thought you’d have guessed by my reaction babe, he said I think I do but tell me the answer & she said yeah of course I’ll marry you & he pulled her closer to him & they kissed again & she said I have something to tell you too but I’m not sure how you’ll feel & he looked at her worryingly & said what is it just tell me I’m sure I’ll love it & she said I’m err pr… then blurted out you’re going to be a daddy & he said awe darling that’s just brilliant how far along are you & she said 13 weeks babe a re you sure you’re ok about it & he said darling I love you love me don’t you & she said of course I do babe then he said well this little one will be very loved by both of Us & everyone around her or him

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